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Swept away in my thoughts of you
For reasons I don't even understand
When all you do is keep me guessing
With your inadvertant mixed signals

The first night we met
I could tell you were different
The way you spoke to me
And how you made me laugh

But since then, there's been only confusion
You compliment me, and then pass it off
As if it were nothing, or just a joke

Or those times when you hug me some days
And others hug everyone but me
Leaving me to wonder why
And at the same time why I even care

Or how you make a point of talking to me
And still can always make me laugh
Are you just being friendly?
Or is there maybe something more?

Most of all, it's the things you say
Sometimes you say you love me
And you made sure I knew you really meant it
But how exactly did you mean it?

And yet I think we could be good together
We have the same view on relationships
On most things really, but still I don't know
How you even feel about me

And I'm not sure I want to.
©2006-2009 ~xxIceWiccanxx
:iconxxicewiccanxx:

Author's Comments

Written at almost midnight one night, so it probably isn't that good. But it's about a confusing situation I'm in right now. I think it's kind of self-explanatory really. The last line was actually added on instinct as I was typing it out.

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:iconvetch:
Ah... nice work. I like how you've described things. Did it help?

~Vetch

--
...we'll live with the sadness
I'll love you with all the madness in my soul
Someday girl, I dont know when, were gonna get to that place
Where we really want to go, and well walk in the sun
But till then tramps like us, baby we were born to run...
:iconxxicewiccanxx:
It helped somewhat. I'm still very much confused, but it got at least part of it off my mind.
:iconvetch:
Good, then. Writing does tend to help alot, I've found.

~Vetch

--
...we'll live with the sadness
I'll love you with all the madness in my soul
Someday girl, I dont know when, were gonna get to that place
Where we really want to go, and well walk in the sun
But till then tramps like us, baby we were born to run...

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